Frigid mist
shrouds
the landscape like
a haunting apparition
drifting aimlessly across
the urban terrain
transforming
the serene panorama
into a delicate
frosted kingdom
populated by subjects
who
gleefully greet
this seasonal
dignitary.
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A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
700 points, ended December 21, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awwww, this is lovely, ahha my bday is winter =P
and i love that picture, it's beautiful =)
and the wording is gorgeous and chipper =)
great job!congrats on hm.
stephanie =)
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very good...
'Seasonal dignitory'! That's a good thought. I love the good spirit of welcoming seasonal changes here. Congrats friend!
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nice
beautifully pictured, from looking through your poems i see you have a differnt stly to amny that i usually read but this is a great write
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Great discription., and wonderful imagery. Loved how you presented this look at it.
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MJ, Your words and picture compliment each other perfectly for me. A lovely combination
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So simple and so true. I like the ways you describe a nature as a delicate frosted kingdom. It was my special pleasure to read this kind of poetry.
~Sonja~
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