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The Ghoul

There is a ghoul hiding under my bed,

Or is it that he's all in my head?

I dont know who i am anymore,

My once and only friend lies dead on the floor,

Bleeding from a bullet wound,

In her head,

My only friend is dead,

My soul is dead,

Therefore i am dead,

And I dont know who i am anymore.

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  • vampire.lust.death
    February 3, 2008

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    hemmmm dark you pull out of the darkenss in man alot from what iv read for fun do something todly imagenary


    • filth in th beuty
      February 6, 2008
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      hmmm ill try 2 do sumthin totally imaginary if u like then dunno if itll b any good though.