dreaming in a far-off land
there lived a princes who was quite grand
in her castle of solid gold
she had a tale of which she told
about young girl in a far-off land
hey! wake up!
it's only you
dreaming in a far-off land
there was girl who was quite bland
no stories, no brains, not one single skill
she really had nothing to furfill
her only freind was this one little girl
hey! wake up!
it's only you
dreaming in a far-off land
there lived a thief who had been banned
stealing was her only chore
for she was surely worse than dirt poor
but then she found a girl who gave
hey! wake up!
it's only you
dreaming in a far-off land
there was a girl who got spray tans
no one knew what she feels
when she walks in her guccis heels
living right next door
was a girl from a whole another world
hey! wake up!
it's only you
Author notes
2) In school, people all have a different social status. The dorks, the preps, the cool people, the jocks, the nobodys..... get it. Anyway, write a poem telling me what status you are and what your life is like as that status, but there's catch. You have to write it like you are a completely different person looking at you. Say you think of yourself as a dork, I want you to write it as another person looking at you.... you could even be a prep showing scorn at your behavior. Be creative in this.
i guess? does it fit?
A contest entry
- A Few Options by MourningSun.
450 points, ended December 21, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
happy now!?
Comments
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i like it your a great poet i like how u rhyme in all your Like paragraphs lol...
Ur poem Awsome!
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it's really good...i like how it describes all different kinds of people
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Yes it does fit and it is a good poem. It was a good poem and told what it was meant to. Good luck in the contest.
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No keep it, it's awesome
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thanks
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its not finished yet but can you tell me how i am doing? depeneding on your responce, i might remove it from the contest
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