drop the egg
and crack my shell
let me break
i don't care
i'm rotting from the inside, out
and all i want to do is shout
make me drift-far-away
anywhere is better than here, today
this is not worth the pain
this hurt and love
just, please, make it go away
Author notes
3) Finally, you can write a poem about either hate or rage... by that I mean, don't tell me your mad at someone. Rather tell me what that emotion feels like. I want to know how it feels to be furios or to hate.
A contest entry
- A Few Options by MourningSun.
450 points, ended December 21, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
happy now!?
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You need to put your name in the author's comments box though but anyway.....I like it. It is a good reperesentation and interesting. Good job and good luck.
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Hey raph, you know, when somethign is worng you can tell it to good ol' simmy ya know
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thansk again.
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