Listen within my silence, my plea morphs to insistent from charm
Not the beauty of my former requests, or a need or cause for alarm
nor the masculine softness of my voice, that soothes your precious esteem
Far from the song you once sung to me, nor the twinkle of your eyes that gleam
No phone feast of hunger, no written words that wrought
From desires changed from subtle, from intimate signals caught
Libido limited from distance, victims of virtual circumstance,
Courting eagerly through this dialogue, striving vigilant as I advance
Enticed cherry flambeau lips, cease revealing this seductive pout
Unrestrained passion has been lifted, these sensual wares you tout
Floating anatomy of chocolate desires, suckle these thoughts as a vision of fact
Annul past passive thoughts, welcome this ravenous attack
Colliding bodies with colliding thoughts, visions of seductive fervor
Secretive rendezvous uncovered, silently moving further
Infatuated judgments, has shaded my realities into blue
Restless nights has been my companion, while lusting after you
Affable gesture has slowly turn to, sexual conversations between two
The cost of depositing ones heart, Paid feelings have become due
Reaching out to my virtual acquaintance, hurtful distance hinders my view
Even though my touch remains empty, I will never stop lusting for you
Author notes
This is dedicated to two great, sensuous women that I, just............... DAMN!!! What can I say. A few poems I read just jumped out at me and this was just lingering in the corner of my mind. Einstein stated," there is a fine line between genius and insanity".
I believe there is a fine line between love and lust.
Epiphany and RainGoddess - throws a flow out that reaches through the pages and grabs at you in ways that you some how personally take ownership of. Its you that they are speaking to. Its you that you wish they desire. The screen comes alive with their images, voice (on screen of course) that is just outstanding. I don't have that big of an ego so I would never think its all about me. But love goes out to all.
Since this is a friendship contest. I wanted to show some love. Thanks for more than you ever would know you have given me
Roses and sugar is coming up real soon. Stay tuned
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Comments
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Lovable you have such a wonderful way of expressing your feelings for women. This is a beautiful write for two very talented poets.
~sweetness~
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Still Great
I still love it, I am commenting again for the group.
raingoddess
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Oh wow amazing dedication to two beautiful sensual women....awesome! I need to find me someone who will write like this for me! lol
Brilliant!
Tasha
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thanks Tasha... its all in the writing.we write to each other and I respond by complimenting othe than commenting. Another way to promote a fellow AP favorite 
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This is well said my Son; You have a very beautifully vivid way of honoring these two poetess. I must say I have watched my daughter grow in the poetic world. Her friendship with you has been sublime. You may not realize it but you are a fine Poet. This poem should allow both ladies to see they are different but totally wonderful ladies. Now am waiting to see what you compose to Sugar & Rose. You see I've been at this for a long time...longer then you are old. And I still have tons to learn...if one has nothing more to learn then life is over.....Praise Jah...Mom
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So true mommy, so true. I think if one remains humble, the narcissistic feelings will remain in my draw with the whips and collars (JK, really......I'm kidding) LOL!!
Any who - I have to really think on the sugary roses. I have to think hard on that one
. Thanks for kind words. I'll keep learning as long as you keep pushing ~ love your son.
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Absolutely Beautiful
Well, what can I say, this is a very beautiful poem and I am honored to be one of the two you have dedicated this too. My friend once again your words have inspired me to write a small piece of poetry but I had to get down before I lost it.
Each morning I wake arms empty, reaching out for you.
Wild wanton fantasies day and night, if only you knew.
Your lyrics seduce, feeling your caress, soft and fine.
Licking my lips, longing to sip and savor this wine.
Often your verses start a burning lust in me.
A passion fighting, to combust, to run free.
There is a very thin line between lust and love.
Virtual friendship, who knows what will become of?
You are truly amazing and you do know how to flatter a women and you did make me blush. I sorry that I missed when you were online but at least you added this wonderful piece of poetry that you have shared with me. You write this to us but often I feel the same about your words, I can hear your sexy voice whispering in my ear, feel the your breathe caress my nape as your words paint a picture in my mind that can send spasms of desire and waves of passion, you speak to women with respect and that makes it even sexier.
You Mykeee are one hell of a poet and if you think that I am as good as you say, I thank you and my Mom (Ennovy), I have had some great teachers, my mom and you have helped me to grow as a poet. So thank you so much for this wonderful dedication poem and for helping me grow as a poet, and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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You are amazing and people should never be afraid to
tell each other just that. even if its not returned. Its
a point of fact. I needed to let you that. And thank you for all my inspirations as well.
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oh wow.
this is really a gorgeous write. love it!
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Thank U.
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Oh my sweetie...
This is the most Intrigueing Poem that I had read in a very long time...indeed this is a dedication that has tiptoed across my Heart and will remain in the deepest parts of my soulful lyrics as a tear glaze my face in Joy.
I loved this and it's entirety Keee...so warm and cozy from start to finish, the light at the end of my tunnel of wanton delights. I didn't expect this, but I am so truly grateful that you embraced so many with this undeniable piece that reaps of rich tones and feather textures.
My heart is full right now, nothing has ever felt like this...
You have definately made my night as I lay awake gazing into the moon's twilight...thinking of you.
All my best and all of my true love as your virtual friend
Ephiphany
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