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Last Second

When tommorrow never comes and
today will never end, what will
be your last memories? Will it be
the hug from you closest friend,
a fight with a girl? Will it be
you laughing at a joke or crying
over a loss? Your last second could
be right now, tommorrow, or 50 years
from now. You never know what to expect
so live every second like its your
last. Laugh at the stupid things, talk
to strangers. Get in trouble for
some fun. Whatt ever you do just make
it count.

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  • sucidal love
    December 13, 2007
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    omg this is an awesome poem!!!!!!


  • crimsondew
    December 7, 2007

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    Well written..I like your thoughts here...Very true..
    As for the form , you could stick to one idea in one line, for a better poetic feel and flow!
    Just my idea! Keep writing!