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Fallen Leaves (PhotoKu)

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Fallen Leaves

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Written October 29th, 2003

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  • Maureen silver member
    November 1, 2003
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    Excellent!

    Beautiful pic' and haiku, Don! Very nice way of describing fallen leaves. In nature, nothing is discarded...it simply becomes one with the landscape.

    <3 Maureen


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 31, 2003
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    They almost look like ice crystals
    With a wee bit of the fall lingering on
    Loved this
    Yer pal lol
    Susan~~~~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 31, 2003
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    Again, you capture the beauty within this pic with few words, what some take a whole page to describe, truly amazing and really makes ya ponder as well on this season, keep up the wonderful work Don and God bless ya! ~Smiles~

    -Timothy


  • NurseChilly gold member
    October 30, 2003
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    At last
    The time has come
    To lose what isn't needed
    To replenish and grow
    At last, joys to be shared
    At last, the leaves fall and the air is clear

    Wonderful Don.. I love these collection of Ku's you are doing right now!!!!

    ~GILL~xxx


  • Kalexi
    October 29, 2003
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    Don

    Beautiful haiku

    I love the picture


    Karen


  • Topangagirl
    October 29, 2003
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    i really like this haiku it's simple yet it is very good i don't know whta else to say i am a beginner so i don't know much about haikus but this one is really nice keep up the good work!!



    *Toppy*

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