Staring blankly at the wall
Feelings of sudden burst
Not knowing how to take it all in
My presence is your thirst
Feelings of confusion
Feeling lost, dread, and hate
Cause you need someone to guide you
I'm busy you to late
You think your so perfect
You think that everybody loves you
But face the facts if your that smart
No one cares what you do
Acting isnt that hard to do
And your "friends" are really good
Your trying to fit in with the wrong crowd
While hiding in your hood
You say your just like us
We're a phase and nothing more
Sitting in the corner bawling
Hiding behind locked doors
A contest entry
- Your Best Prewrite 3 by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended December 12, 2007, 43 entries
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Thank you for sharing this
I've always said that one should be true to themselves and not try to be anything other than who and what they are
This is a fine write!
Thank you for sharing and for being part of this contest!
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