My dear, death suddenly ripped you away
Before I had a chance to say goodbye
I never really had a chance to say
What you say to loved ones before they die
I cried for you, for weeks on end, alone
Because I'd thought that you had gone for good
But now your shining light has lead me home
As somewhere in my heart I knew it would
I feel you now wherever I may go
Your love in every aspect of my life
Some laugh at me because they do not know
That though you're dead, you're here, my loving wife
Your picture's what my tears have fallen on
But now, I know, you're never really gone...
Author notes
first sonnet in a while, I feel it's decent, but I want your feedback.
A contest entry
- Death and the Light at the End by Snow-Flake.
1000 points, ended December 14, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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love it:"]
i love your writing :]]
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interesting....
grr
i can never work in a certian style
i've always gotta bend the rules. or throw them away.
i like that you practice w/ different techniques, lol
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