I drimpt a drem las nite
I drimpt I scen this mazing lite
It wuz blu orng red yeller an grene
The most butifl lite I have evr sean.
As I lokeed up at the Hevns so blu
I thout to mi sef is this rela tru
Inh thu middle of that mazing lite
Wus a lidle Str shinen so brite.
Th mazing lite begen to mov that lidle Str
Lik a aroow it shot strate and tru
and when it perced my hart my lov
I new it wus you.
Ill al waze member that dreme that nite
I drempt of that colerful mazing lite
that liddle str livin in mi hart
Is the surance you an I will nevr part.
I would rewrite this in my regular poetic style
but hey why take all the fun out of it.
I realy don't know if this will fit in your contest or not
just thought I would enter it anyway.
If it don't fit just D/Q I will understand.
Thanks for reading.
Author notes
Ah shucks I forgot to spell check
Have fun everyone
Please tell me what you think
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Ah! That is so sweet and lovely. I really enjoyed reading it.
Jenny -
LOL. I don't think I've ever DQ'd someone, so you have no worries. I actually enjoyed this very much once I got the gist of how o read it. thanks so much, it was wonderful!
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Oh I love it!!!
This is absolutly wonderful...and who needs spell check any how...you are fast becomming one of my very favorites...and you have one very nice relashionship with the one who captured your heart...that is such a nice thing to read about in this age of throw away
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GREAT
A love poem at that ! HA HA HA.
cmon rainbow, pick a name for this style... -
lmfao an awsome write and who cares if you forgot to spell it makes the poem more unique dont you think?
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