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Through Each Dark Shadow, He Shines

teetering on the brink
tears of sorrow
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acceptance the cure
tears of hope
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eternity on the edge
tears of fear
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rebirth of passion
tears of understanding
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faith within His hands
tears of strength
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His Word your sword
tears of knowledge
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light of His Love
tears of acceptance
HIS
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Life is overwhelming,
hard to bear.
Lord,
I pray, that
you touch those in
need. For life is what we
make of it, usually it is we ourselves
whom destroy us. Bad decisions resulting
in pain and suffering. You are the Almighty, Lift Us.
Through dark shadows the light of Your love
will forever shine, can we see it? Yes.
If only we look in the right
direction. It is then
we can accept
Your gift.
Love.

As the day come to end,
and darkness becomes  your friend.
We shall see all thing in Heaven designed for us.
Lord is the true Light, the promise, the Comforter, the Way.
Thank you Jesus, for the light, the strength, the way...
When death calls on us it is through His Will
that we are accepted and destined for Home.
A glorious place it will be, a powerful life after Life's tough
journey.
We are accepted into the Kingdom...
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Death and the Light at the End
This contest is for inspiring poems of hope. The theme is death and coping with death.

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  • paulcreates silver member
    December 9, 2007
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    Winner


  • butterflywriter
    December 9, 2007
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    WOW on all counts...

  • SoulWhispher
    December 8, 2007
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    SO well done, the form was outstanding and the content was so well done, great job, Love John


  • PerVirtuous
    December 8, 2007
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    Not bad.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 8, 2007

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    this is a powerful and beautifully written piece which holds alot within it. well done and best of luck mom


  • thelordreigns gold member
    December 7, 2007

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    Powerful and Perfect

    This is truly a masterpiece. The message is The Message of hope to a lost and dying people. The presentation is superb.

    I love your poetry.

    Many blessings.

    - joanne


  • Griswold
    December 7, 2007

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    Wonderfully written sweetheart, a great message and a fantastic presentation as well. I Love you...Scott


  • Oleander
    December 7, 2007

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    This is a great poem! I think that the black in the background makes it hard to read the poem. I enjoyed your poem.

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