Is that you, my guardian angel?
Why do you look so sad,
Is it my treacherous sins that make you feel mad.
I am sorry for i have tried my best,
Please tell God that i have but one request.
To help me from this life of living hell,
Redeem me from this pit into which i fell.
I need some guidance, i feel so lost,
No human can help me, i need Gods help the most.
I'm tired of this life of misery and pain,
Wondering to myself, why my life must remain.
Is that you, my guardian angel?
Please lead me to the light,
I am tired of living in fear and in fright.
I feel so empty, so separated from men,
I must refrain from trying to take my life again.
You are my friend, my hope and my love,
sent from the one true God above.
Take me tonight, make me one of your kind,
Get this pain and sorrow out of my mind.
Please, my angel of God, I need you now more than ever,
Take me from this life, to live with you, happy forever.
Is that you, my guardian angel?
My one and only friend,
Please take me away, to where life will never end.
Author notes
Every time that I am in total despair and i want my life to end, where else to turn but to God?
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by SummerlandRayne.
586 points, ended December 8, 2007, 16 entries
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Comments
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GREAT
wow that was REALLY good most people when they write the traditional form of poetry it sounds like they are rambling. I admit im guilty of that sometimes. but your poem didnt do that not in the least truly one of the best poems ive read in a while
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Desperation I am very well acquainted with!!! Loved the mood you set...the words near pleading for sheer peace. I understand this! Thank you for the entry!
Blessed Be~
Az
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awsome
This poem relates to me in so many ways
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