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Outside the Office Window

Flecks of Madness
drift from bleak
fields of Nothing.

Constant barrage
of platitudes and
Jack Frost's commitment

Treads of Trees spin
on asphault rivers
full of metal dragons.







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Winter wonderland

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  • Nature Song silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    I like the last line full of metal dragons! Winter can be depressing at times. Great description of the winter time blue's! Keep penning. ~Sie


    • Sensual Sapphire
      February 24, 2008
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      This one came to me during a time when I should have been paying attention at work. It poured forth and demanded that I put it here. Thank you for reading!


  • ckwriter69
    December 8, 2007

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    hmmm outside the office window indeed I like your images, sphault rivers full of metal dragons, I love it. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.