Each night I lock the door
to close the night,
never miss that star
alive crimson,
floating above the horizon;
wishing me Sweet Dreams,
I can feel the whisper
echoing in my ears.
A smile always ends on my face
no matter how my contour.
Author notes
Prompt: The stars shine bright in the Heavens
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended December 7, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options by peaceandpenguins.
700 points, ended May 6, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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really nice sis
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Thanks a lot dear...lots of and cookies!
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Aww sounds beautiful! Very nicely done! Thanks for sharing and I wish you the best in the contest
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You are welcome and thanks for your lovely wishes!
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what a beautiful star to end the day with! lovely imagery and sweetly expressed. Delighted in this poem best to you in the contest ~blessings always~
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Thanks ....I watch it daily as I shut the door and lock it for the night, it is there even when the moon is not!
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This is really sweet thank you for your entry goodluck to you in the contest best wishes and much love*rosE*
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