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I wish it did

I want to feel pain
Because then it might be real
It might be more
Than my imagination

I want to understand
How you feel
How I feel
Because I am so confused

I want to show you
Everything that is pain to me
I know you would
Make it go away

But I shouldn't
But I can't
But I won't
Because that's not how it works
I wish it did

Please tell me what you think

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  • z etoile
    February 19, 2008
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    Great job with expressing your emotions!


  • yael
    January 17, 2008
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    this is very good.
    it shows your true emotions.

    good job.