Spotter,
I know you're here
(but can you hear)
in another room,
o ut s ide ...
And, four legs are running
because I know that tactic on target
even though away when she barks tonight,
it's something I realize
grown-up puppy repeats,
Spotter.
Author notes
Please keep your speech as sweet as this presentation beautiful doggy!
In a list
A contest entry
- Anything by Norman Crabtree.
390 points, ended December 23, 2007, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wanna be the owner too?
Comments
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How brave of an eleven year old to enter such a BIG (85 entries) contest. ALL of us enter a lot more contests than we win so please don’t get discouraged. You write especially well considering your age.
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Thank you for entering my contest
did you honestly think this would win?
~Norm -
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Hi
I know this is one of my simpler ones but still thought it was cute. It's just that there was no other contest that worked for this one, and I like the thought of being in one and said yay for an anything prompt. You have to expect that in such openness which I saw in a different saying in your final notes.
I believed it was ok to try was just for fun,
SplishSplashPencil
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