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Wo Ai Ni

You turned
Saying you had to leave.
I felt my heart crack right open
Into a world of grief.

I felt alone
Like you were leaving me too.
Another world, another dimension
Makes me have to say goodbye to you.

I felt you leave
Saying you'll be back.
But all I need;trust;
Is what I lack.

I plunged into
A world, unknown to me.
I felt alone. Afraid.
Afraid to say, "wo ai ni"

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 14, 2007
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    I like the way your heart sings in this piece. You did well in expressing yourself. Great job!