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It was strawberry [graphic erotic]

 

 

GRAPHIC EROTICA

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She slipped the wrapper

from the red popsicle,

and watched as it floated

to the floor and

then studied the ice lollypop

momentarily,

admiring its phallic form

and wondered what flavour

it might be.

Her lips opened slightly,

and she took it to her mouth

then sucked it

leisurely, her tongue

drifted to her hand,

and she lapped the juice running

down her wet sticky fingers,

as her mind wandered

idly to a past moment of passion…

He sat and watched her,

as she rubbed the red

lolly against her clit,

and in pleasured pain she smiled

as he took it from her,

and gently spread

her legs wide.

She gasped as he thrust

it into her moist pussy;

he slipped it in and out

rhythmically,

and as the juices ran

down his wet sticky fingers

he passed it to her mouth

 

she sucked it leisurely
and decided:

it was strawberry.

 

 

 

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  • HeLovesMeNot
    April 30, 2008
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    Wow...well okay then. Very kinky, very sexy!!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    Awesome work here!
    Very creative and well thought out
    piece here. Thanks a lot for sharing
    it and keep it up!




    Jeremy0826

  • Uriah Hamilton
    December 20, 2007
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    Heavy Breathing

    This increased my heartbeat....very much so,
    Uriah


  • marmaladeontoast
    December 11, 2007
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    Fab work

    Very sexy indeed, mouthwatering even


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    December 11, 2007

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    Well, I really am at a loss for words!!!!  Very well written and quite descriptive!!!! I usually do not like erotic poetry, although, one in my live it was one of my favorites... All I can find in my head to say now is this is wonderfully written piece!!! Best wishes in this contest!!!!!  You did a great job here!!!!!!

  • davidwright silver member
    December 10, 2007

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    I know this was a serious endeavor but the ending brought a chuckle to my throat. I hope you don't mind. It's well written and inciteful

    • sarajaneUK
      December 10, 2007
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      Laughs, i don't mind at all! Ice play is always fun!! Hope you enjoyed! sj


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    December 8, 2007

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    Oh, this is just a tease!
    Nice, ummm, visuals. Definitely worth a read or two.

    Thank you for entering and good luck
    Storm


  • Jiraiya13
    December 8, 2007
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    this is sheer brilliance i kid u not! This poem is funny, erotic and very entertaining. To see poets like u blossom is one of the highest pleasures to me in the world. I just like how u turn something that can b seen into just sex into an aesthetic piece of brilliance. your creativity astounds even me!


  • leo2
    December 8, 2007

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    I've often wondered what flavor it is too. After years of research and countless experiments I've concluded it was tuna...lol. Naughty but nice my friend. Best of luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • onesugar gold member
    December 7, 2007
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    Flipping brilliant

    Good luck

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