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Victory

Be tied to Me throughout the day
Stay close to Me
Don't fade away
Bow down on your knee
Pray constantly
Stand with Me
Firm on your feet
Stay with me
Always
Stedfast in faith
For victory comes
Today

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  • C.o.g.
    December 10, 2007
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    very nice I like your poem very neat I would of liked it better though if you would of described your words better but thats just my view of it, only my opinion but remeber this if you were really writting your true feelings and they were from the heart remeber God only looks to heart and if you were trying to impress him he will give you honor. God bless