Chilling words,
Warmth surpassed.
Oxymoronic memories,
Contradicting,
You’re just another paradox.
Web of misused emotion,
Delicately forcing its way
Through your stagnant veins.
Infect your personality
And change you for the worst.
It only gets better from here,
Just another tragedy.
False promise
Seeping through fractures
In my shattered
Countenance.
Façade
Lies.
Watch you succumb under
His pressure.
Merge flawlessly
Assume it’s another ‘fantasy’
Wait till it tears you down
And wave after wave
Of reality will cascade.
Ice blue eyes
Hiding a soul as bright as fire,
Ignore the way he laughs at you
And focus on the pain.
Malignant fantasy,
Show your masochism
You sadist you.
Fake another smile.
And crash into the wall.
Author notes
Tell me how awful it is?
A contest entry
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Thank you for sharing
This is uniquely created and worded
It's not "horrible" at all
I wish you the best of luck in the contest! -
You want me to tell you how "terrible, horrible, no good, very bad" this is? Well, sorry, I can't. It fascinates me. I like the confusion it generated for me. It made me think of a relationship where your lover is cheating on you, and you know it. It's tearing you apart, but you believe the lies you are told because you want them to be true.
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Thank you. I honestly thought no one would understand this. I almost didn't myself.
Glad you didn't think it was "terrible, horrible, no good, very bad"
~The Anti-Assemblage
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