As I sit here longingly
Awaiting to see you again
I know you are singing
With the Angels above
The lord has sent you
To be my guardian angel
Watching over me
Keeping me safe
Thank you Daddy
For I shall one day
Be by your side again
Author notes
In Loving Memory Of My Daddy
A contest entry
- Pick your favorite prewrite by Loveandblessings2u.
600 points, ended December 10, 2007, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow this poem made me want to cry... i know how you feel, i miss my daddy too
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This touch me. I don't know your pain, but I know the pain of not being near my kids.
L.ove A.lways
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First I would like to ask you to please not 5 star my comment or comment me back in anyway. I am trying real hard not to find out who anyone is, at this time.
Now, about your poem it is so touching.
I loss my dad on Dec 7 three years ago,
so reading this lovely piece at this time
made me cry. Your poem reminds me of one,
I tried to write for my Dad, but it didn't
turn out this nicely.
I love what you wrote here,
it really is very touching.
I enjoyed your poem.
Thanks so much for entering my contest.
Best of luck to you.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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SO DEEPLY TOUCHING!!!
Your love shines so bright in this! I am sure he is watching over you always.
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Oh so touching and very heartfelt, your dad, he's in heaven, watching all over you guys there, with an endless love as always
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Aww Sis, I feel your pain && I am sorry for your loss. Your very correct though. You will deffinately see him one day as I will see the loved one of mine that is up in the heavens as well. Great Write Sis. Love Ya
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sad sis i love you
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This is really sad im so sorry I understand your pain. Best wishes and much love
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