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Advice

My friend once gave me some very good advice:

"Don't get overly hopeful," She said

I only wish i could have saved another from falling too deep.

I could of saved her from dissapointment,

From endless grief,

Anxious all day,

Trembling by night,

Waiting till that special time;

5:00.

Walking up to the door,

Where the list hung,

She was confident,

But maybe a little worried.

And she looked through the list,

Checked it twice,

But, next to Belle,

It didn't say "Leigh Kozak".

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I dedicate this one to leigh. I might be wrong in what i am assuming by our talk on the phone. If I am, then i still hope this is a good poem. I'M NOT GUARANTEEING ANYTHING PEOPLE, DON'T JUDGE BY MY POEM.

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  • TwilightWolf
    December 8, 2007

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    i did get in but i lost the part of belle to a sixth grader and im stuck in the fucking enchanted objects. The derctior made a bad choice that sixth grader can't sing. I still cant belive i lost to a sixth grader


    • LuckyBlackCat
      December 8, 2007
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      gosh leigh, you know what? you and i can make fun of the sixth grader.. . . . . ... . .and see all of these people that feel bad 4 u? It's gonna b ok.


  • StarIlluminated
    December 8, 2007

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    Yes I know what this is about and I'm really sorry sorry sorry leigh!! u even had a callback too. just hang in there.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    December 7, 2007

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    Good job. I like the list part... kinda sounds like santa's list. lol. hope ur friend feels better.
    Jade.


  • riasme
    December 7, 2007
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    awwwwwww

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