Spheres and circles are an ultimate beginning end.
Reverse this process in my log I will send.
:Somehow I am, but not as I was,
swirled together with crunching masses weaved with fluid
Chaos cross.
The heavy elements rest in my mind,
chemicals squirt up from behind.
Over the light and time that could not escape,
of the imploded warp and mattered landscape.
The slow moving weight, that moved fast, mixed
with rocks that have been stretched,
loss of mass broadened, replaced then fixed.
The fact is it's all doing well.
Explosion?
Nah!
Relocation!
No gamma rays here, from what I can tell.
A contest entry
- What's Within a Black Hole? by aslanlight.
600 points, ended December 30, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is something when its nothing but still something as if it were nothing?
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Great write!!!!!!!! Filled with imagination!!!!! It is a very unique description or rendition of the "black hole" theme..... Best wishes in the contest!!!!!!!
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great
thank you
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Great write!!!!!!!! Filled with imagination!!!!! It is a very unique description or rendition of the "black hole" theme..... Best wishes in the contest!!!!!!!
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Wow
Very well done...Infact excellently written...
all the best!
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like this one, no gamma rays here from what I can tell love that closing!
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Excellent !!
It is so hard to describe a place that we as humans know very little about, but you have really brought a place such as this to life with your words. A really excellent poem. Well done !! I wish you All Good Luck in the contest. All my very best wishes from Rose xx
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This conjured up some amazing imagery in my mind. Your profundity deserves my applause.
Peace Georgia
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