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release the pain

let the music drown your cries
let the page capture your tears
let the wall break your punch
let the pillow absorb your screams
let your friends take the pain away

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  • lovingfatman
    January 22, 2008

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    so true everything you wrote is so true except for the fact tht puncking the wall will prob break your hand an dyes tht is why we have great friends like us to take the pain away and comfort you when u r upset


  • WickdlyUndrstanding
    December 11, 2007

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    i like this one
    becuase it sorta refers to those inanimate objects, as friends
    and that whole vision
    really makes the whole situation of being hurt
    come to life..

    great write.
    thanks <3

    ~WU