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Lola

I don’t keep
old love letters
keepsakes, pictures
or stuffed bears

People think it’s strange
to toss them out so
thoroughly

But to me,
their logic is backwards

Why?

Why keep souvenirs

of failure?

Mementoes
to cling to,
to linger over
like a sore in your cheek?

You can pick at it with your tongue
turn them over and over
and wonder what happened
until you bleed
or fester and rust-
into a husk, who

rummages through trunks
of brittle memories
on birthdays and anniversaries
that no longer include you
or exist

Instead:

I tear them up
I feed them to the flames
of a spiteful little bonfire
built just for the occasion

and every scrap
every cinder is

a tiny phoenix
that I tie a breath of hope to

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  • Blooming Poet
    December 19, 2007
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    GreAT POINT. Why keep souvieners of failure. I like this poem. It is option 2.


  • Blooming Poet
    December 19, 2007
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    What option??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????


  • Phineas Red
    December 9, 2007
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    So incredibly agreed.

  • SnowLion
    December 8, 2007

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    I completely agree with this philosophy actually. I used to keep love letters but it was too hurtful. Your last lines - it really is a rebirth to let them go.