A word spoken, a touch suppressed
As darkness approaches the edge of day
I stroll alone along the path
As evening mist clouds my way
The voice from far off breezes
A hand to guide me, to steady my step
I hear a whisper, a long lost soul
And the forlorn anguish of tears unwept
Suddenly through the twilight skies
I can see, yet hidden from my sight
Your message from another life
As words of love drift through the night
Dee Garner
© December 7, 2007
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Precious
Aww.
This was oh!
So very tender.
This is one of the best poems I've read
because..it says so much in so little words.
And you,are a great writer.
...Simply Me♥
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we all have those days that we are down and out...
but when we least expect it love come to pick us up
and brings joy within our lives!
Good reminder my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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Beautiful
I adore the tender imagery of this write...
I knew this would make me cry..smiles
Such a wonderful piece of poetry.
Peace and many blessings
~A~
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I think that does happen sometimes, the message from another life. But I don't know if it makes the sadness any less. At the same time, parts of this poem are very serene.
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Sometimes, if I'm very still and concentrate I can hear those voices from 'another life'. The sentimental value of this poem is priceless. Somehow it's comforting to know that those who have passed on are still alive in our memory and can get in touch with us if we take the time to listen. Best wishes in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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beautiful imagery
Written well done LIKE IT LIKE it LIke It a lot!
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Beautiful and Excellent Write
A Message From Forever is an interesting title and it drew me into your write. Such a beautiful poem. The flow and softness of this write makes it even all the more special. I know personally for me it meant something very special, so thank you for sharing your poem with me! Excellent Write and good luck in the contest!
Blessings
Kelle Marie
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This was ajm oacked full of such beautiful imagery! Your are so talented! While reading this I was just awestricken from the beauty. Your talent truely shows in this write. THank you for sharing!!
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The title is great, explains the poem succinctly, I think.
Wouldn't that be something? I mean, we all have or will have people from afar that we'd love to hear again. My grandmother, father, older brother for example. But as wonderful as it would feel, it would hurt too I guess, but maybe not, maybe what they would say would make all the difference.
Anyway, what the poem for me is really about is hope and love, but mainly love, that those we long for are never gone, not as long as we keep them, and our love for them in our thoughts, hearts, etc.
Enjoyed it quite a bit, thanks.
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Very well done !!! The flow in this gives one chills. I totally love it. The best of luck to you in the contest Granna
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Very pretty and very soft. The poem leaves me feeling contented and hapy It's a really nice bit of writing. Best wishes in the contest.
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