Care not for the little bumps and what nots
share all you've gained with the other tots
fare thee well inside of your current lots
dare to give all, to give all that you've got.
Adversity has seasonal purpose
intensity's arrested in prose
density knows not how to compose
propensity is subject to foreclose.
Linger at love's gate of pure welcome
finger the savory journey to home.
Author notes
This is a new form invented by moi;
called - Patsy's Ryhme Tyme
First stanza consisting of four lines, with beginning and ending ryhmes, concurrent with each following line.
Second stanza consisting of four lines, same proposition.
Last stanza consisting of only two lines, but same proposition of ryhming words.
Each line must be between 8 and 10 syllables long.
A contest entry
- Final Round - Invite Only by Florida Sunshine.
1750 points, ended December 22, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LuL ~ this is a very entertaining piece.... The form I'd rate it *** Please don't be offended, cause its truly meant as a compliment *** on the level of poetry as Dr. Seuss. Dr. Seuss was a poetic genius, he opened a world unlike any other.... and this "form" can easily be on the same level. I luve it!!! Nice job of encouragement for anyone. I could easily see this piece being passed on for generations.
Congrats on making it to the final round~ good luck to you ~ really nice. -
Great creation and write, good luck in the contest, not the easiest is it?...lol
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oi no fingers ok smile and winks cute piece
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Peter, are you saying by any chance that my new poem form is too simple hahahaa well, smile, you'd be right...thanks for the fun of your review
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Well, for the life of me...
You knew I'd love this form you have invented! 
I must try this out, dear friend. 
Lovely and fun both together!
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Wow, Melodies I am so happy that you like it, I am flattered beyond belief...smile, thanks so much
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