...............If all in my heart
....I could express
.
.words wont be enough to
.express the sorrow
.
.. lake dried up in gay sunshine
...and rains of pain
........
drain the light out tulips.
.stands on my grave and
...............
.roses bloom on far away
......lands, yet I smile
.
. in my pain and
..tears fall in contentment
..
my heart speaks
..unknown languages
.unheard odes
unheard melodies
unsaid tales ..unsaid theories
my heart
seeks
. something in
.all
Author notes
my first shape poetry.. can you see the broken heart in this
A contest entry
- Shape of Impact by Gossamer Guile.
900 points, ended December 20, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a beautiful concept. Well done I doo enjoy reading your flowery poems. A gentle soul you art.
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Beautiful. I love the message here, and especially the repetiton in the ending. Very strong. Thanks for entering.
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I can see it yep, looking good! Great poem to, best of luck
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Good job, Abdulla.
Feeling seems to me to be
stronger than rational thought
For the mystery of evil we see
Love is the answer that is sought
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i love the lines, but i think that you need to remobe the dots, i think it would look better that way....a brilliant piece though, thankyou
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thanks my friend but those dots help me to get that shape.. this is my first shape poetry and it took so long.. now i see it needs a lil more touch up
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very deep, very emotoinal. Nicely done.
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