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Against Medical Advice

Against medical advice
I went...
Up into my head
Unescorted

Medication neglected
Depression affected
Insanity detected

I fell through
The broken windows
Of my mind

Impaled by the...
Broken shards of reason

Lost in the confusion
I wandered the...
Subterranean tunnels
Of my fractured mind
 

Author notes

I hope it was ok to use both prompts in one poem
Broken Windows
Falling

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  • Ami
    July 12

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    this was really good loved the rhyming in this one
    Thanks for entering good luck

    -♥Amy♥


  • karma-n-peace
    December 11, 2007

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    Great write!
    Been here done this LOL. In fact... I am here doing this.
    Seriously though your poetry is amazing!


  • uu11
    December 9, 2007
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    ya don't worry you could have used all 3. I like the flow of this poem...its interesting how you used the prompts as well. I would've never thought of it.

    Thanks for entering!