A new beginnig, a new start
The turn of day
A change of heart
School has come
School has gone
Getting praise and awards for all that I've done.
I've worked hard this year and in the end it seems as though nothing has paid off
I've let myself down
I've dropped the ball
I push on,this struggle, I have to redeem
I keep my head high, I stay fousced on my dreams
I don't want to slow down because others are in my trail
With looks of hate and pity, they're waiting for me to fail
Please Tell me what you think I want feedback
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Nicely done here.
And yes you should never give up on your dreams.
Always reach for the highest and you'll score.
Don't worry what's behind you , because if you let what's behind you drag you down you'll never succeed in what you want.
Keep your head high!
-Mandi
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thanks
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Think many can relate to these feelings you express so well in these lines - we all go through them at some time during our growing up years, and even when we are adults. Liked the rhythm, rhyme and the way you have explained your feelings here. Keep writing, take your advice and stand tall, don't give up and be a success, don't let others get you down.
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