Frosty the snow man,
was no fairy tale, no way.
He was made of snow,
but now we know,
he had come to slay.
Frosty the snowman
had a machine gun by his side,
when the chilren came,
to laugh and play,
instead they all died.
There must have been
black magic in,
the soul that he found,
cause all he wanted to do,
was; mow the children down.
Rat a tat-tat-tat
Rat a tat-tat-tat,
look at Frosty go...
Rat a tat-tat-tat
Rat a tat-tat-tat,
over blood splattered snow.
A contest entry
- We Wish You A Scary Christmas by Dmonik.
1750 points, ended January 1, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Creepy Carols by BleedingKittii.
450 points, ended January 1, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hahaha! Oh, there's a good one. I never did trust that freaking snowman..... >.> I love the thought that it was black magic that came to him. Cause I mean, what GOOD magic would be in a random hat found laying around...
So....who sold him the machine gun? XD
Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!
~Kittii
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Rat a tat-tat-tat
Rat a tat-tat-tat,
look at Frosty go...
Rat a tat-tat-tat
Rat a tat-tat-tat,
over blood splattered snow.
That part... that part there... GENIUS!
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Hehe, fabtastic re~write...great to do aren't they? Wonderful gruesome imagery
Best of luck in the contest and Merry Christmas!
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You shouldn't have a problem placing in the contest with this horror tale about my favorite snowman!!! The imagery was awesome. I loved this, Cathy
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Blood splattered snow, Ho, Ho, Ho!!!
Dark & festive!!!
Love it...
Well done!!!
Keep up the good work...
Good luck in the contest...
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Ha!
Funtastic, had me in stitches...lol Best of luck! -
haha
oh wow....wow
*laughs hysterically*
this was GREAT!!!
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THANKS!
I'm glad you enjoyed this...
*PEACE*
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA..... OMG!!! This was AWESOME!!! I love it!!! So funny....definately gonna sing this one!!! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you!
Every once in awhile, my dark side slips out!
*PEACE*
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Thanks for entering. Good Luck
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Thanks for your entry. I shall read it thoroughly upon judging.
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