For in the light
The air so golden fresh
The whispered willows
Licking at her breast
The morning dew
Blanketing us with love
Caressing the joy we share
Leaving us in happiness in the rich morning blues
Every thing she ever said
The lies & tales we made up that warm eve
The gentle songs the frogs had sung
The light of the moon shining upon the lovers' nest
A soft breeze to take her breath away
A gentle touch to make her weak
A world away, hidden from us all
The vanity of such a imaginative place
So vain is the night
The black mirrored water, shining back to you the stars' reflections
Long drawn out breaths
Begging to the gods this not all just a dream
The grass is soft beneath your backs
The night is sweet, as is her kiss
You have brought me to my knees
And I am still here, begging you please
The night was quickly washed away
The dawning light of a sun drenched day
The sparkle of the prisms on the ground
Leading us back to a lifeless hell
Author notes
Well, my first ever happy poem.
The end is kind of interesting, but it was the only way to draw it to a close.
Not sure what exact point of view I was coming from, you decide.
-Jess
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A contest entry
- Pre-write Mania for all! Give me your favorites! by Salt Therapy.
375 points, ended December 28, 2007, 80 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?
Comments
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Interesting to see jess has a sentimental side,good job.
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that was a nice way to close it...i say that because that is pretty much how it feels when an enchanting moment like that ends. you did a very good job at painting the picture of romance. i enjoyed reading this very much. thank you for sharing it.
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