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Bronze - The Caterpillar Wings
A caterpillar discharged from her cocoon, becomes a butterfly full in bloom. She spreads her wings like petals in the sun, showing off her new found beauty to all. Her caterpillar friends are jealous indeed, wishing that they to had beautiful wings. She tells them all but you'll get your wings, as soon as you eat some more weeds. If you want to have beautiful wings just like me, you better start eating those flowers at your feet. © Cara L. Greenlee, All rights reserved http://allpoetry.com/poem/3683792
A catepillar dischrged from her cocoon Becoming a buterfly full in bloom.
She spreads her wings like petalls in the sun
Showing off her new found beautiy to all.
HEr caterpillar friends are jealous indeed
Wishing that they to had butiful wiongs.
She tells them all but you'll get your wings
as sson as you eat some more weeds.
if you want to be butiful just like me
better start eatng those flowers at your feet.
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A contest entry
- I cnant splel nad i ndt arce by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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MAXBOY--I JUST NOTICED, YOU ENTERED A CONTEST WITH "HE HE" THAT IS CRAZY-FUNNY MAXBOY
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MAXBOY
"She spreads her wings like petals in the sun"
I like this part, it is like bud from a flower opening up in the summer sun.
MAXBOY
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< Lost Rainbow
Read my comments on the poems in this contest.
They vary, but mainly....WEHN UYO GNOAa NAEM TISH NWE SYTLE ?...It's GREAT....a WONDERFUL outlet from seriousness....PLUS....it puts people who are a little TO critical in their place. PLEASE tell me when/if you name this new style....I've had more fun with the poem I entered and reading/commenting the others than I've had in AGES !
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