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Death to the world

Death to the world, a nightmare's come
Destruction soon shall reign
Let every home accept there doom
and embrace the suffering
and embrace the suffering
Embrace, Embrace the suffering

Horror to the world, the blood shall rain
let men there hopes destroy
I'll stab and slice and burn, and bring you pain
and massacre your joy
and massacre your joy
your joy, your joy, massacre your joy

Soon through the lands, the world will know
I'll spare not young or old
And from your veins, the blood will flow
in volumes yet untold
in volumes yet untold
in volumes, in volumes yet untold

Its time to purge, this whole disgrace
and all the world shall rue
the day that they provoked the unholy crusade
Shall any yet survive
Shall any yet survive
Shall any, shall any yet survive

Author notes

Once was "Joy to the world". Let the destruction reign.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 8, 2007
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    Twisted jingles, fabtastic a great creative poem, best of luck


  • Mrs D
    December 7, 2007

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    really twisted......i sang right through the poem ......goo luck ...and thanks for entering..i was a real joy to read


  • jcat gold member
    December 7, 2007

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    I like it!!! Excellent job on twisting a classic into something deranged!!! Good luck in the contest. This will be another one stuck in my head while I wrap gifts and deck the halls!!


    • Eternallycurious
      December 7, 2007
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      Many thanks, im glad to be getting so much positive feedback on this one. Im happy you like it!


  • nonya
    December 7, 2007
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    Ummmmm...kinda creapy..but good. lol


  • NyteShade
    December 7, 2007
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    Thanks for entering. Good Luck


  • Dmonik
    December 7, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry. I shall read it thoroughly upon judging.


    • Eternallycurious
      December 7, 2007
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      It was quite an interesting contest, I just had to enter, thanks for creating it.

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