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Black Snow

Nature's requiem
for the darkness
of humanity.

Each snowflake turns
and turns again.
Touches the corruption
and wanders away--

black as night
and still as pure
as when it fell.

A contest entry

please tell me what this makes you feel

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 7, 2007

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    Oh I love the thought of it touching the corruption and then wanders away..perhaps, smudged, but still of pure intent.


  • moluv10
    December 7, 2007

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    nice write. That black snow causes a lot of negative things to happen. the only problem is how can we stop it from falling? best of luck in the contest.