Unique cold crystals
hurling towards earth
to put it to sleep
like a soft lullaby,
let all bygones be bygones
as it erases
all traces
of errors
proudly displayed.
It hushes
the cacophony of sins
raging like fires,
now all sizzled.
In a list
A contest entry
- Covering A Season Of Sin - three hours by CarolDesjarlais.
700 points, ended December 7, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on your trophy.I love the essence of this post.
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thanks a lot for so many lovely comments....
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'let all bygones be bygones" HOW NICELY PUT, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ENTERING... I do not feel so hopeless now, after reading this.
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I am glad....
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Very nice take on the prompt thank you for sharing this with me goodluck to you in hte contest best wishes and much love always
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Thank you dear
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This is nice Dear I like it.
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Thank you so much...
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