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Peace



 

 

 


The only thing left is the pain inside

Slowly eating my soul 'til there's nothing left

Just an empty shell with an empty smile

To cast upon the selfish masses so innocent


They've known no real pain, known no real Hell

They exist in blissful Euphoria, and still complain

While I've suffered; pleaded for death to come sooner

They've struggled for ways to extend their miserable lives


My soul died long ago, leaving me no emotion, only pain

The Devil himself must have established this torture

Some wrong I caused in another life I suppose

I beg for death but even God mocks my pain

Makes me stay here in this Hellish place forever


Father Time, the evil bastard, drags each minute into years

And smiles maliciously as he watches me break


So now I sit here, begging for death as seconds drag by

My damnation is eternal, my suffering never ending

No point in life, nothing left for me to feel

Even now I can feel the insanity taking hold of me

The darkness fading in, soon it will reign my mind


The ones who kept me alive, claiming they save me

Damn them for it, they should have let me die

Now they shall know the price of their actions

They shall know true fear, they will know despair


The sadistic bastards who kept me in this Hell

The ones who say they saved my wretched soul

I have no soul now; they've killed it for me

Tonight they die, and I'll smile at their pleas

No compassion, no mercy, no sparing their lives

No conscience, just darkness; no sanity left


One by one they shall fall, and I shall know peace

No, no peace, only vengeance; then my death

Doubtful either will yield much reprieve

But it's far too late for me to even care


They will know pain, but nothing close to my suffering

They will know what it's like to wish for death

And I, cruelly laughing, will tell them no; they must suffer more

After all, I'm saving their souls by doing so


Then gleefully I'll end my life; no one left to stop me

Finally welcoming Misstress Death with open arms

And when I reach Hell I'll laugh in Satan's face

After all, alive or dead, Hell is Hell, at least now it's deserved


And finally, my soul will know justice



Justice, but never peace

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I've found myself enjoying the darker side of poetry recently, thought I'd take a crack at it.
As a side note that only a special someone will get in its entirety, It came to me in a dream.

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Comments

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  • "My soul died long ago, leaving me no emotion, only pain
    The Devil himself must have established this torture" Impressive lines. The darker side of poetry suits you. Xds-gX


  • Wearychild
    March 13, 2008
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    You are absolutely Awesome! I love rhis poem, it speaks directly to my heart. Great Job!


  • Evil Fuzzy
    December 14, 2007
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    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • vampire of thought
    December 13, 2007

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    *shudders*

    slightly creepy, ok, really creepy. I can feel the emotion, the want to die, the hatred for those who tried to help...makes me feel bad, for all the friends I've stopped from suicide, for all the friends I've tried to help...

    If only they knew...


    still, an enjoyable read, seeing as I am partial to dark writes.

    keep writing, you're perty darn good!

    ~VoT

  • Amanda 88
    December 13, 2007
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    great job with this poem!!! I really like it!!!! I enjoy reading it!!!

  • carole21
    December 13, 2007

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    well said

    sad with a vengeful twist . . good construction . . like "My soul died a long ago, leaving me no emotion, only pain" and "I beg for death but even God mocks my pain" . . some people do think earth is Hell . . very interesting piece . . !

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