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Look

Look at what we’ve become
At everything that we all have done
Whether it had been good or bad
Despite if it made us happy or sad

Look at all we’ve completed
Admitting some of us cheated
But sometimes things must be cut
So that warmth can spread though your gut

A spreading warmth of success
That I am bound to confess
Makes me smiled like never before
And happiness is spread galore

So please look at all we’ve become
At any and everything that we have done
See all of the things we’ve completed
Alright, I’ll admit it, some of us cheated

So?

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  • Emm Jayy
    December 7, 2007

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    I really liked the rhyme. It flowed nicely.

    I also like the entire idea of this. It reminds me of that Matchbox Twenty song, but more personal. Like more amongst friends, less involvement of the entire world... you know?

    It's good.