A fantastic rose painted desert,
Its soft colours hewn from life,
Lies here waiting,
for loves
first dew soaked kiss,
Then and only then,
will this arid desert
blossom and bloom
Author notes
This is for the contest. Please excuse the layout, I'm having problems with my browser
A contest entry
- parched lips by adsaige.
300 points, ended January 13, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the direction the prompt took you in. An original take for sure.
Good luck in the contest! -
sigh...want to drift with this dreamily...
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Thankyou Affair-I Bleed- for your nice comment on my poem. I'm very pleased that you liked the imagery. Thankyou for inspiring me with the picture and your contest. All my very best wishes from Rose xx
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Hm...I will take your a/n in consideration. I love the imagery of this piece. Thank you for entering and good luck. -
Thankyou Tender wolf for your very kind and encouraging words on my poem. I do appreciate them especially as I am a great admirer of your poetry, so your words mean a lot to me. Thankyou again. All my very best wishes from Rose xxx
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Such a beautiful picture you have penned*rose* The softness of the dew to a parch land is like the first kiss from ones love then so does it bloom*rose*Winner for sure*rose*
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