Selfish are the people here
Feelings are deaf for them as they can't hear
People choose to fulfill their needs
They are sowing big plants of weeds
Somebody tell them what they are doing?
Nurturing the plant of hatred which is screwing
How can they overlook loved one?
Knock down everything for their fun
Hurt somebody who loves them
Decieve somebody who cares for them
Oh gosh !! This shrewd thinking
Somebody come and save me as i am sinking
Noone offers a helping hand
Noone along takes a stand
Swirling moods seems like crap
Lots of clutter muster in this trap
Cave made of hidden dangers
Made by those who are not strangers
Pinch you in the deep down there
Getting normal prentending they dont care
Frustration churns in your mind
Boiling anger makes you blind
Reflects a grimace on your face
Makes you lose all your grace
I cried out loud
Shedding the tears of the anger cloud
Still half full as it seems
That will finish on the screams
I will come some other day
When anger comes along the way
Writing it off is a good trick
Flowers of happiness that i cant prick...
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good write.
Be careful of spacing & capitals, otherwise Great write. well done
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great
this is a great write filled with emotion and reading delight, you do have some typos you may want to read through and fix.. also after your !! should be This capitial there. But a very good write!
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I flitted through your profile and i can see you are a publisher. I might get help from you. This is my dream that i want to write for something like magazine, news column, cards, calenders or anything...
Can you help me get on the right path and how actually the great poetry is written?
Looking forward to your response
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Thanx for correcting me..I appreciate it.
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