loving you from far away
missing you each and every day
this hurts more than i thought it would
but we've gotten farther than i thought we could
i love you more with each minute we speak
your voice, your words, make me weak
waiting here patiently for that special day
when you come for me and take me away
the day, fast approaching, when we'll be together
i just want you to know, i'll love you forever
A contest entry
- Love Dedications by Blooming Poet.
440 points, ended January 3, 2008, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For You I'll Wait Forever by GypsyEyes.
475 points, ended December 16, 2007, 32 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i got the chills
this is so beautiful you are reaching beyond this world with your words. I love it.
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Awasome
Carlie, This Poem Is Really Beautiful
i love it its so sweet......
you should do something with ur poetry
hoping to read more by you...
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can you please include your username in the author notes. It would be very nice, but optional.
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I think this is beautifully done; written with a lot of heart
Wishing you the very best in the contest!
Bravo! -
judge says
oh my god! i think i love you! this poem is exactly what i am feeling right this very minute! i liked the flow and thank you for entering and good luck with my contest!
~Dommi -
Thanks for titling it, you are a finalist in my contest. Congrats
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WoW *speechless*
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Are you missing this person in a long dsitance relationship, or because they don't feel for you. I have felt this way many a times before, but not anymore. It is very good, but you should title it.
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