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Silent night, somewhere beyond the insanity of yet!- (a prewrite)

Silent night, starless might,
man has staged his final fight,
there where cities used to be,
lie the ruins of reality,
sleeping forever in peace,
sleeping forever in peace....

Silent world, hole-y world,
all men's bombs have now been hurled,
no ones left to claim the prize,
no one's left to compromise,
no one's left to care,
no one's left to care.....

Silent man, lifeless man,
if only you had lent a hand,
if only love with mankind was shared,
if only somehow you could have cared,
if only for the children,
if only for the children.....

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Silent Night

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 8, 2007
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    Powerfully sad. Very well penned good luck!


  • jcat gold member
    December 7, 2007

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    Well i clicked on here thinking I was in for a scare but instead you broke my heart and squeezed out a tear.... This was actually really beautiful to read.. so true and so incredible sad...Best of luck to you in the contest.


  • Melodies
    December 7, 2007

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    Admiring and agreeing...

    Ah yes, a silent night because our planet has been bombed out of the solar system. How smart and thinkable is thy poem, dear poet.


  • NyteShade
    December 7, 2007
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    Thanks for entering. Good luck


  • Dmonik
    December 7, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry. I shall read it thoroughly upon judging.

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