Candied shite is swallowed whole,
truth confused by popcorn bowl,
sticky treats that should console,
wrapped up in your chocolate role.
Sherbert fountains cloud the eyes,
lollypops when someone cries,
lemonade and cherry pies,
fizzing bubbles to the skies.
Willy Wonka it is not,
he would share what he had got,
you are fed with jellied snot,
fattened up to line the pot.
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Brilliant.
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Thanks...most appreciated.
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Once again, you don't sugar coat anything! Love it..
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Good sweet metaphor here
I like the rhyme here.
Thanks for your comments.
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That is some cool, crazy scratchings, I like it.
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