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Hypocritical

I hate to debate
with opinions of fate
but I can't help but state
that I hate your debate.

You fight for your rights
'til your goals out of sight
abusing your right
to put up a fight.

How can you pray
for a better day
free of dismay
then walk away
and never try
yet continue to cry
abusing your right
to put up a fight

You scream for a dream
of how life should seem
but with each enpty scream
you forget what dreams mean

How can you pray
for a better day
free of dismay
then walk away
and never try
yet continue to cry
screaming for dreams
of how life should seem

I hate to debate
with opinions of fate
but I can't help but stay
how I hate your debate.

Please tell me what you think

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  • DaNASCAT
    December 10, 2007
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    catchy. Rap it up!