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[ Miles may separate us ]

Miles may separate us
but somehow i can
feel Your breath on me
when i close my eyes to sleep.
You invade the subconscious portals
of my sleeping mind
and i
smile...
Somehow You manage to
touch me with Your unending love
and eternal loyalty...
like fingertips penning
cursive love letters
upon my feverish flesh...
i feel You...
and my
ovaries giggle as i
feel You tickle my femininity
each time thoughts of You
tiptoe through my psyche...
yes...
from the other side...
You span from coast
to coast
to glide into my fantasies...
making a slave of me
when in reality...
W/we have never touched before.
You have
stepped through the door
of my complex mind and
found Your way through the maze...
persistent to get to the core...

Now that You are here...
i implore You to stay...
remain steadfast and true
until the day
that i can
touch You...
drop to my knees in
reverent subservience...
distance and time
has absolutely no relevance...

for i
love You with a love
i never knew existed...

and i will remain Yours...
forever.

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  • zochit2me gold member
    December 8, 2007

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    Perfect form of love indeed, knowing no boundries. No limitations to keep the heart from knowing the feel.

    Great job and I wish you much success in this contest as well as all life has to give you.



    Becky


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 7, 2007

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    Oh now I LOVE this! Picture perfect proof that love and passion know no time or boundary limits...
    Most excellent, my friend!
    Wishing you the best of luck in this contest!!!!


  • Perfectly Imperfect
    December 7, 2007

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    I very nice piece of writing, thankyou for entering Well done x