Tell me what you want to do,
With the rest of your life,
The rest of your life,
With me...
Show me what you want to do,
With the rest of your life,
The rest of your life,
With me...
(Chorus 1):
All of our dreams,
And all of our dreams,
Between two...
Tell me what you want to do,
With the rest of my life,
The rest of my life,
With you...
Tell me what you want to do,
With the rest of our lives,
The rest of our lives,
Me an' you...
(Chorus 2):
All of our schemes
And all of our dreams,
For you an' me...
Tell me what you want to do,
With the rest of my life,
The rest of my life,
With you... just you...
Author notes
Finding the love of your life
A contest entry
- The Form of Love by Perfectly Imperfect.
450 points, ended January 4, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write Me A Love Poem by Toxic Meltdown.
400 points, ended July 16, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark Goddess, I am in love by hisfallenangel821.
700 points, ended October 28, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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It's a nice song. The repetition thing is not one of my favorite semantics. Great job though. Thanks for entering.
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I did like the poem. I can see how it would reflect meeting the love of your life, and it is a good written song. Although, I am looking for something with a bit more description, a specific encounter.
Don't get me wrong, this is a good poem, but I'm looking for some specifics in this contest.
Thanks for entering, and feel free to enter another one if you wish.
Good poem though.
BC. -
This is lovely, I can hear it put to music Well done and thank you for entering
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