In the dark of night,
when all is quiet,
the creepers come out to play,
They'll snatch you from your bed,
And bite off youre head,
All and every night,
But never in the day.
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awesome. it really reflects the darker side of people well.
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haha omg yhu actually made an acc jus 2 comment lolz i din think yhu wuld..lol
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MAHAhAHAH yESSSSSSSSS
yes you did a imaginary one well no thare are this that only come out of night and bit of your head but you went to a deffernt relm with this one nice
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haha thx but i made this LONG ago in like december or sumthin
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I just read another one of your poems... you like writing about monsters and the night don't you? good job though.
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Very creepy write here. Add a few apostrophes though like in 'theyll'. And 'youre' should be 'your'.
All the best
Pozo
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thx 4 th tip
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this is a good poem..short and to the point good job.. very creative..Heather
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