Knotted hearts
Casting shadows
Entangled in diamond gallows.
Reflecting through the colored embers.
Is a twisted tale of bright sunshine.
As the knotted hearts do entwine
A contest entry
- What Do You See Now ? (Round 2) by just mercedes.
500 points, ended December 14, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Lovely I so feel this is deep and has hidden meaning within your lines.
I know I can reflect on this poem all to well
Thanks for sharing
Hugs Julie
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nice. soft flowing and i think kinda deep
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yes. knotted hearts indeed, entangled and entwined, great responses to the prompt of vegetal growth Beautiful image in /diamond gallows/ and I like the rhyme of sunshine and entwine. Short and sharp and sweet poem, thank you.
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