I love the love you make me see
A love I love with all of me
Like clouds of blue beneath a bird
I soar above my years of dread
These tears you see are not of pain
But are of joy, look what I’ve gained
Each time our fingers come entwined
I feel I hold your heart in mine
I read the words inside your eyes
And know we’ll never say goodbye
These tears you see are not of pain
But my love, you are such sweet gain
I came to you with so much fear
You hushed them with kisses so dear
Calm like I never felt before
Making me love you more and more
These tears, my love, are not of pain
I sure would know, look what I’ve gained
Author notes
love lyrics
finding the love of your life
Adora
A contest entry
- The Form of Love by Perfectly Imperfect.
450 points, ended January 4, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Dedications by Blooming Poet.
440 points, ended January 3, 2008, 53 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - HAPPY CONTEST. My first contest only 1 rule! must rhyme. by K1r5ty.
900 points, ended December 29, 2007, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME (Now 20,000+) Part 9 Feelings by cricketjeff.
1500 points, ended January 29, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A ...=...Anything by TheAshtrayGirl.
550 points, ended March 13, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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good poem I would cry to keep it up with your writing and thanks for commenting on my poem
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thanks a lot, will keep up with yours too
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Thank you for your entry in our contest, a good poem of love.
Please join us in our final contest of our extravaganza. For this we will only be accepting new writes, no pre-writes, but you may enter twice. Look forward to seeing you.
Sue and Jeff
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can you please include your username in the author notes, it is optional but I encourage it. best of luck to you.
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thank you for entering my contest very nice write. I felt like this when i was in love everyday! things for me used to get so overwhellming but in a happy way i would cry! never of sadness though just out of happiness of what i had!! i very much love his peom and was just what i was looking for thank you for entering and good luck!!!
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If you didn't know this poem, is for my boyfriend. My hope is to find the perfect words to say what I am feeling, this is the kinda of poem I am looking for. You are a finalist in my contest congrats.
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This is the perfect poem I am looking for. This is how I feel to a tee, but haven't been able to express it, this is amazing. Thanks for entering.
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Gee, thanks for your kind comment. That was fast! Glad you like it. Thank you too, Mandy.
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This is beautiful and touching, something I can relate to, and just what I am looking for
Well done and thank you for entering x
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very very sweet
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