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Fay Of Death

The deliverer of death is the Absinthe Fairy,
Yet amidst the ugliness of death is your beauty.
Oh treacherous fay of the untimely death,
You take ones life before it's their day.

A mighty seductress you are of the young men,
You tempt them until you get their soul to sin.
The beauty of your skin is like bait on a hook,
A young man will glare and desire after one look.

Then he is lured into the greatest of woe,
He's trapped from the wild seed he did sow.
Forever entangled in the trap you set,
Like trying to free oneself from a net.

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  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    December 20, 2007

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    Wonderful take on the pictrue inspired contest. I really appreciate you taking the time to enter.
    Thank you soooo much
    I wish you the very best in the contest,
    Mant Blessings for the holidays,

    ~David~


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 15, 2007

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    Fabulous !
    The final two lines keep swimming in my mind

    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda